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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
A broken song, A broken soul to fill your empty broken soul The music stops, and then we dance so full of "love" within our trance I found my heart, that day you slept She knew my soul, my heart, she kept and since that day, I've never wept for want of you, or what I left my life since then, Is what I prayed would fill my life and heart oneday a simple life, I never stray From loving her and life today I wake up never wanting more than what I have today, no more My heart that beats, nolonger mine Wakes next to me, and hers is mine |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Happiness fills your words with the contentment you feel in your heart...very well done...*hugs* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jason, Enjoyed the read. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
beautiful. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jason, this is wonderful, truly wonderful. It sings of hope for some of us who have lost ours, and I think you have found a very special love....~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wake up never wanting more than what I have today, no more My heart that beats, nolonger mine Wakes next to me, and hers is mine absolutley lovely, enjoyed reading this very much, and the miracle it evokes... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a beautifully written lovesong  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
waking up, not wanting more... that's the true sign of happiness |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Nice read.  |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hair upon the pillow like a sleepy golden storm (Cohen) Good words Bodger |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Jason. Much enjoyed. Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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VBallNut Member
since 2003-02-12
Posts 60Virginia, USA |
Wonderful write. Isn't it a great feeling to wake up and know that the search is over? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, Jason, keep that, as you do. So hard to find and extremely regretful when let go. |
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