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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-08-13 09:03 AM


Could You Cradle Me For Awhile

Can I cry upon your shoulder
When I’m feeling a little weak
Will you put arms around me
Assure me of love you speak

Bring me warmth and comfort
Giving a hug when feeling low
Will your lips whisper tenderly
Stroking cheeks as tears flow

Restore me with reassurance
Nestle me close to your chest
Will you hold me and rock me
Bring relief from my loneliness

Lifting my chin with your hand
Soothe me with a gentle smile
Will you hold me close to you
Could you cradle me for awhile

Hope ©2005
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Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
1 posted 2005-08-13 10:44 AM


Oh my....this is simply beautiful, Hope...a cry torn right from your heart...*big hugs*

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2005-08-13 10:48 AM


Beautiful, this reads like a song.such a gentle request.

Jason

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2005-08-16 01:04 AM


Lovely...James
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