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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-08-12 04:43 PM


She has furnished a kingdom within my heart, and wove a crown of golden laurels, that stand for love that lives upon my flesh. Beloved, as her soul caused passion flowers to blossom within me unlike that of time which falls a withering rose if true love is not found.

I give my soul to her before the heavens, nor will I ever be without the fruits of the Gods. I drink from the rich fountain of Athos where my heart flows freely with amorous care.

One minute before the design of her lovely face is more beautiful than the skies portrait of a Tuscan sun. Received by grace, a star of benign light shall fall before her and a bright angel shall enlighten her spiritual eyes.

Her beauty is like that of a pleasant song, to anything that breathes the sweet air taken from the earth. Traces of her passion are found within my heart with the harp playing the many tones of love.

(C) Kevin Brian Wright



© Copyright 2005 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
Startime55
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1 posted 2005-08-12 07:09 PM


Romantically beautiful and filled with the magic of passion...Very well said...*hugs*

lyricpoet
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2 posted 2005-08-12 08:29 PM


THANK YOU, MUCH!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-08-12 08:45 PM


whew! how romantic this is!
lyricpoet
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4 posted 2005-08-12 08:51 PM


many thanks for your reply!!
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5 posted 2005-08-14 01:37 PM


How beautiful!  This reads like a whispered prayer before the soft light of candles at midnight...

Enjoyed!

~tier

lyricpoet
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6 posted 2005-08-14 01:48 PM


THANK YOU!
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7 posted 2005-08-16 01:19 AM


I don't know what to say to you...you take the very breath of me from my core!  I can't help it...I love your work.  Me encanta!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

poe
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8 posted 2005-08-16 01:24 AM


The feeling of devout love is expressed in such a beautiful form. It captures the reader off gaurd

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

iliana
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9 posted 2005-08-16 02:23 AM


That last line....whoa.....I am melting!  Truly, a declaration of love!!!
lyricpoet
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10 posted 2005-08-16 06:09 AM


thank you
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