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Beyond four winds
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Beyond four winds |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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what is left of me, but a better solution? failed generations of egos tripping toward christ with unending cries ripping entire beings from their hearts rising from unspeakable horrors the many selves unravel targeting a double madness crying in the shadows from poisons raining atrocities, an echoing, bystander’s true oblivion i’m wrapped in a body that moves some gesture of meteor an Achilles' heel, hisses of love that i am capable of knowing leaning toward the roots of a tree that is standing upwards which time forgot which in man’s upright position is no longer present feelings are dragging me back like a lion with its prey… stretching me out unto the mighty comics i become one with everything… where branches reach out to the earth like an instinctive clairvoyant vision i feel earth with my mind and know of our permenant relationship i stare at that relationship, like a visitor in a home where thoughts process inner mirrors world springs, wave moments like hues running together…. like spiritual beings ego lets go of me and i fall floating, floating with horses and clouds becoming discharged on an echo i am a thought on a Grecian threshold where gods invent fire songs angels give me wings i am a hologram of consciences ness copulating events within a larger scale balanced & golden with a time, where reeds of the sea, stand still for a moment, where sensations come and go feeling a great thickness… disembodied from the mind by a natural process ignorant of the past or future i am a january graveyard |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Oh my gosh!!! What an incredibly spiritual journey you took me on...I am going to print this one out to read again and again...Absolutely stunning...**big big hugs** |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"i feel earth with my mind and know of our permenant relationship" The entire poem is strong, so to chose two lines seems like an insult to the rest...yet these two hit close to home, at least the house of my own mind, so I had to put them in quotes... A very tight ending, to the point, it spells the end of the poem, like a piano falling on your head from a second floor window.. enjoyed -------------ice/ford ><> |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
This poem needs to be back at the top...so I think it needs a helping hand...*big hugs* |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Wow! Jason |
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