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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-08-12 07:44 AM


I Walk

I walk the path of want to be
Of sailing thoughts of yet to see
Guided by a firefly
On never ending wings of why

A star that blinks the black of night
On and off until its light
Beating wings of feathered thought
Bringing me a short cavort

Upon this shore I stand and roar
At the sky and at the floor
And shake my fist at frit and wit
There seems no notch I seem to fit

I’m sick of eating coconut
Breaking shells as hard as but
Walking round the Islands ledge
So tired of this circles edge

I think I’ll build some wings of palm
And fly above this funny farm


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-08-12 07:47 AM


morning Sy

fly on then...you can do it!
just be careful of the landing m'friend

Toerag
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2 posted 2005-08-12 07:53 AM


If you'll just take your medicine Sy you can "fly" around the funny farm without all that effort of making wings....do you live close to Bally?....Have ya got some cold beer and some good looking loose wimmen?....Money?.....
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2005-08-12 08:01 AM


passing,
Watch for me in the sky. LOL

Toerag
That would be over doing the coconut juice.
LOL

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-08-12 08:23 AM


I want what Toe's drinking

Good Morning Mr. Sy

hang in there, the air force of the Gods are on their way...with wings of sure flight
to learn from you....

Hugs

Sunshine
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5 posted 2005-08-12 08:26 AM



God bless those itty bitty fireflies...






MGROVES
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6 posted 2005-08-12 09:38 AM


  you replace smiles when needed and fill a space with light and joy  thanks

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Startime55
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7 posted 2005-08-12 09:42 AM


I'll come by on my dragon later...we could give you a lift so that you don't fly into the sun...A wonderful way to start the day...*big hugs*

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-08-12 09:53 AM


LeeJ
Nothing special about toe's drink.
Good morning sweet, wink.

Sunshine
Yes I sort of got used to them.

MGROVES
Would like some coconut juice.

Startime55
OK my Randy dragon can't seem to get off the ground lately. LOL

Susan Caldwell
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9 posted 2005-08-12 10:28 AM


"Upon this shore I stand and roar
At the sky and at the floor
And shake my fist at frit and wit
There seems no notch I seem to fit"

Oh Sy!  I really loved this!  I too, am a fist shaker..


"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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10 posted 2005-08-12 10:31 AM


Well, T-Man, you've done it again! I absolutely adore this poem and the winged man who wrote it!

Your feathered thoughts give wings to those who read them!

Your closing couplet has conjured up quite an endearing picture of you in this "angel's" mind!

~ "I think I’ll build some wings of palm
  And fly above this funny farm"

Have a great flight!

Love & Angel Light,
EA

Janet Marie
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11 posted 2005-08-12 10:48 AM


Oh but youre so cute when you cavort.

And I'll just have to make Randy some raspberry tea with his coconut milk to get his motor running. lol


Love that closing couplet me sweet Sy...
fly on up to my funny farm...its been so coco-nuts here Im starting to like it.

*ww*

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-08-12 10:50 AM


Susan,
You are a dear.

Earth Angel
You are such a sweet Angel.

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2005-08-12 12:33 PM


JM
That's me, Randy the cavorter. Glad you stopped by I was getting a little worried.

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14 posted 2005-08-12 01:47 PM


Thank you for taking us along on this cavort... and thanks also to the firefly for guiding you. *S*
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2005-08-12 02:12 PM


suthern
You welcome on both counts.

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16 posted 2005-08-12 04:59 PM


You walk and you talk
toss in a little writing
I enjoy the read

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2005-08-12 05:50 PM


Interloper
Thank you my friend.

SmartChick
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18 posted 2005-08-13 08:07 PM


I'll be watching for you. Hope you fly my way. It would be nice to see you.
garysgirl
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19 posted 2005-08-13 08:43 PM


Hi Seymour,
Fly on over to my part of Florida. I might
take a flight with you. LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2005-08-13 09:34 PM


Smart,
Thank you dear I'll look for you. LOL

Ethel,
I'll look for you too. LOL

CocoBaci
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21 posted 2005-10-18 01:57 PM


This is one of my fav's
Seymour Tabin
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22 posted 2005-10-18 02:40 PM


CocoBaci
Thank you so much.

StevenS
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23 posted 2005-10-18 05:44 PM


Great Seymour, sometimes I think the whole world is a funny farm. :-)
Seymour Tabin
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24 posted 2005-10-18 07:58 PM


StevenS
Sometimes I think you are right. Thanks for the read.

vandana
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25 posted 2005-10-20 07:48 PM


good read
Seymour Tabin
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26 posted 2005-10-20 07:58 PM


vandana
Thank you dear.

vandana
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27 posted 2005-10-21 06:30 PM


good read
Seymour Tabin
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28 posted 2005-10-21 06:52 PM


vandana
Thank you again.

MGROVES
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29 posted 2005-10-22 02:28 AM


yea, especially when all crazys where shipped to the land of the so called free. lol

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

MGROVES
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30 posted 2005-10-22 02:41 AM


back for another

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Seymour Tabin
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31 posted 2005-10-23 04:43 PM


MGROVES
I know what you mean, thank you dear.

nakdthoughts
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32 posted 2005-10-26 11:33 AM


There seems no notch I seem to fit


true for me, too

hope you and all the others are surviving the storm's wrath

M

Thomas119gold
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33 posted 2005-10-27 10:04 AM


I always enjoy stopping and reading your work, but I don't always have the time to write a comment.

Today I do have that time and I must say again I am impressed.

I just hope I can one day excel to your level of writing.

Tom

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34 posted 2005-10-27 01:51 PM


"Upon this shore I stand and roar
At the sky and at the floor
And shake my fist at frit and wit
There seems no notch I seem to fit"

Sure glad this one came back.
Sy, hoping all is well at your funny farm.
We all miss you!

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