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stevebrklynnyc
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0 posted 2005-08-11 04:16 PM



Asleep or awake
I don’t know
Gently stirring
Critiquing every move

Lines drawn from the dark
Every curve traced in form
I am lost
Enveloped in the now

Trying not to move
Gentle spirits rush my being
Woven from fabric of distinct views
Collage of one

Daybreak pierces essence
Anew, we stir to ones desires
Friction beyond one’s own
Slave to this addiction

Slowly intertwined
Beating softly
Dare perception, death laughs at us
Electric waves move through me

Starve the hunger
Make it right
Slowly lacking retreat
Remedy the lost fill

Changing closer
You make days seem lost
One moment in time
Passing through me

One can see
Beyond the boundaries
Ever closer
To you

© Copyright 2005 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-08-11 04:55 PM


Needs a few reads to do it justice

Deep, thoughtful, twisting

Bodger

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2005-08-11 05:12 PM


Passionately beautiful...*hugs*

stevebrklynnyc
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since 2004-01-04
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GA, Camden
3 posted 2005-08-13 11:48 PM


Thanks for the replies, Steve
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