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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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0 posted 2005-08-10 06:57 AM



there is a new highway today
over beside the old one
but oblivion grows between

as a hedge with hands
the just out of sight kind

I remember the curves and rise
as if they were always there
probably just dream lanes

that my eye lights high beamed
or the watchers whispered as secrets

from the backs of their signs
and the wind fed to me as their echos
when the cellophane between night and day

was just a liar's breath thickness


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scribblenote: ennead is nine..a red line number perhaps, on some machines that don't use speedo's to measure how fast the night can run..  


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-08-10 07:19 AM


I'm wondering quite frankly if Adam came from Atum?  

Well done my friend


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Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-08-10 07:28 AM


hi
ways
evolution

and

oblivion...

um-hmm...

take the back roads, Sir...

may take longer
but you'll be better for it.

Martie
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3 posted 2005-08-10 10:40 AM


The old Redwood Highway is different from the new, both are pretty, but one folds you into the shadows of the trees...and so I like it more!  Enjoyed your words as always!  

[This message has been edited by Martie (08-10-2005 12:04 PM).]

Cloud 9
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4 posted 2005-08-10 01:28 PM


Love that old Redwood Hwy.....

MGROVES
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5 posted 2005-08-11 07:41 AM


enjoy your words as always~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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