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Of Evening... |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
I was out walking as often I do, Late in the evening; day’s bustle was through, When a calmness came falling down from the trees, Whispering soflty on night’s cooling breeze. I wondered the message the calmness did send, While I listened intently to night’s gentle wind. I knew not the answer, the who, what or why, When I looked to the firmament, to Luna on high, It then mattered not of my incomprehension, As I gazed to the heavens, to Luna’s ascension For in Luna’s glow, lay the pathway to calm, Leading this mortal to heavenly balm. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I should go walking more  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... she's so insistant at times, isn't she? If the moon had sound, I would think it would be a croon... and mesmerizing, as this is. (grin? I've stumbled many times, in broad moonlight. But lawsy, what a show...) LkissL |
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shatteredsilver Member
since 2005-03-31
Posts 63middle of nowhere |
Evening - the best time of day, to me. Within the sound of silence... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
*sigh* All there really is to say about that. Marilyn. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Tim You have let me see the moon that shown then calmed the walk and took you home Thank you!  |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Tim, I just read this and now I'm looking forward to the evening fair. Thanks for a lovely poem. SG |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! I can only say that this poem is MAGNIFICENT...I LOVE IT...*big hugs* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a marvelous write and read, not to mention, the remarkable images you so well painted it is the experience which reminds us and smiles |
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