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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-08-09 03:30 PM


The sun how it beats upon me
as her crimson red lips
graze his skin one last time

The tears that are shed,
the bed that will never be warm again.

The flowers are placed down the grave
is dressed up once more. The Memorial
of the past is repeated.

Like Poetry inmotion for the living.
The Clouds past the rain comes by as
a glimmer of hope a rainbow sprays the
dawn sky,As everyone watches the dearly
departed saids goodbye once last time

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
1 posted 2005-08-09 05:32 PM


Said for all of us I think

Bodger

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-08-10 07:28 PM


Nice writing...James
JesusChristPose
Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777
Pittsburgh, Pa
3 posted 2005-08-10 08:49 PM


I enjoyed this. I recently experienced this feeling and can relate.

"I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces."

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