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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-08-09 02:16 PM


If I were a weaker woman
maybe I would have fallen
to my knees and bled my tears
into a weeping lullaby,

and though I can't think
of too many things
that I can thank you for
I can say it for giving me
the strength to watch
as you walked out the door.

Please....understand
many hard lessons
have been learned from you,
but this one, above all others
rings loud and true;

my strength in the end
always wins
and as sure as the sun rises
new tomorrows begin.




I refuse to make plans past this moment in time....

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-08-09 02:20 PM



Your tenacity...
to accept...
so much...

is one of the reasons
I admire you so.


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-08-09 03:23 PM


"my strength in the end
always wins
and as sure as the sun rises
new tomorrows begin."

Why I do declare lovely Donna...
It would appear you have a wee bit of Scarlett O'Hara in you!
And m'dear...that is a good thing.
Love ya lady~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2005-08-09 04:20 PM


there is strength when you believe, and you do....walking beside you

luv you....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2005-08-09 05:27 PM


Good words

Someone once said "my strength is the strength of 10"

Bodger

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
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Ca
5 posted 2005-08-09 05:29 PM


"Please....understand
many hard lessons
have been learned from you,
but this one, above all others
rings loud and true;

my strength in the end
always wins
and as sure as the sun rises
new tomorrows begin."

Exactly! I love this.....

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-08-09 05:30 PM


What a position of strength! I'm smiling at you, superwoman.


passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2005-08-09 06:12 PM


a beautiful write, indeed
Startime55
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Alberta, Canada
8 posted 2005-08-09 06:59 PM


You are a true woman of strength who meets each dawn with power and heart...**big big hugs*

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
9 posted 2005-08-09 07:14 PM


yes that sun
is a savior
heartfelt and poignant, as always gentle one

Paul Wilson
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10 posted 2005-08-09 09:27 PM


Donna...That's the way too show how strong you are. Enjoyed, thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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