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Open Poetry #36

I am Juju's challenge

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-08-09 08:48 AM

Borne into a mother’s arms
flailing weakly tiniest fist,
combatant, perchance
some far off day,
but now to suckle
and duly rest.

~*~

I am Juju’s challenge

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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1 posted 2005-08-09 08:51 AM

oh wow, this was fantastic....loved this, the weakness of the birth of a poem, with little hands...Sunshine...this was awesome!

Challenge met very well!!!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-08-09 08:51 AM

Sunshine

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-08-09 08:54 AM

Yes, indeed! A newborn baby is vulnerable and you conveyed that exceedingly well!

Juju's challenge has spawned some very fine poetic vignettes!

Love & Sun Light,
Linda

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-08-09 08:59 AM

B E A U T I F U L !!

Challenge exquisitely met!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

5 posted 2005-08-09 10:06 AM

very nice~~

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-08-09 10:10 AM

Juju
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In your dreams

7 posted 2005-09-04 07:37 PM

Wow I like this alot. I like the angle you took as well.

-Juju

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

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