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ice
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0 posted 2005-08-09 06:05 AM



­
­­Light spots on chestnut
Seems a perfect camouflage
No scent, helps the fawn

Alert, the doe goads it on
Coyotes howl in the distance
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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-08-09 06:27 AM



Perfect!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-08-09 06:41 AM


yes, perfect, and truly gives vulnerability a picture perfect meaning!!!
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2005-08-09 08:29 AM


I can see the whole scenario being played out! Now that is what I would call being vulnerable! Good job, ice man!


Linda



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2005-08-09 08:46 AM


ice
Frame it and hang it on the wall. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2005-08-09 10:49 AM


Excellent!!!  

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

froggy
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6 posted 2005-08-09 02:56 PM


Beautiful Ford.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

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Gaia
7 posted 2005-08-09 04:32 PM


Ford, you see with keen eyes and a warm heart, and generously share both.
Juju
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8 posted 2007-01-21 03:00 PM


Wonderful

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thougts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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