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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-08-09 03:16 AM



Well I'm not going to change,
I've been stepped on, Used,Abused,Forsakened,Betrayed,
Hit On,Slapped On,Beat upon.
The list ya it just goes on.

This curel world isnt my game I just wanna go
out there and not be played.
sweep me up onto a silver cloud rise above
the incrowd.


Let me go where I want to, speak were blue birds fly and happiness is what I seek.
Take me away to another day were love is theonly way


No more cursing fighitng or horrific actions,
but kissing and hugging that is my main satisfaction.


Find me a guy and make a family change
the world even if its not through me


sorry its so rough i got to fix it later


© Copyright 2005 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-09 06:55 AM


its not rough, what it is is you and you've made a statement...which are your feelings, and very important...just don't allow what the past has brought, to seek revenge or distrust, because there are many many good people out there...otherwise, you might miss something very precious...

You love very deeply and put your entire being into life...and I cannot help but admit, I smile at the way some people describe unconditional love...unconditional love doesn't mean you have to accept unacceptable behavior...or be a victim, for anyone...you have a right to expect, truth, respect and to be who you are...you go girl..

Well done and thank you for sharing.

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2005-08-09 02:28 PM


thanks

yea i try not to judge people but give them a benifit of a doubt due to the fact that i can't let past reccurances rule my being

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