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stevebrklynnyc
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0 posted 2005-08-09 01:35 AM



Words will not describe
Insatiable wonder
A second shadow
Kill the light

There she stood
Never knew
Finally she smiled
Eyes wide open

Walking on air
I am helpless
Approved by two
I am frozen from thought

Blonde with a touch of green
Colors bend in the wind
Sand between healing
Orange moon, waves crashing

Make my way
I put my arms around her
Am I way out of bounds?
Let this night never end

Introduce me
to your heart
we know
no more empty

© Copyright 2005 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-08-09 06:47 AM


filled to the brim, with love for all things...

loved this...

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2 posted 2005-08-09 09:38 AM


we know
no more empty


Perfect ending -- absolutely perfect. Isn't it strange, how such a complex emotion can be said so completely, in such a simple way!

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3 posted 2005-08-09 07:01 PM


very nice
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4 posted 2005-08-09 07:05 PM


Well written of the deep feelings love gives us...*hug*

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5 posted 2005-08-09 11:21 PM


now that is a warm and pleasant dream
stevebrklynnyc
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6 posted 2005-08-10 12:53 PM


Thank you all for reading, I really do appreciate all of your responses, Steve
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