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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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0 posted 2005-08-08 01:19 PM




I Think He Left Me For Dead

I wonder if he ever thought
If I was still alive or dead
Perhaps he will enquire
Upon those months ahead

I wonder if it would happen
Would he remember me
Something might occur
That could jog his memory

I wonder how he was doing
I had thought of him a lot
Faithful friend I had been
Seems that had been forgot

I wonder when he finds time
My emails might be read
Though he knew all along
That I am alive and not dead

I wonder while hanging here
What can be his excuse
I think he left me for dead
Yet he even forgot the noose

HopeĀ©2005
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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
1 posted 2005-08-08 05:35 PM


I have wondered the same thing about mine.
inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2005-08-09 06:57 PM


hardhitting
and felt over here
hugs

Startime55
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3 posted 2005-08-09 07:01 PM


You capture the feeling with perfection and heart....It is his loss of you that will hurt him the most in the end...*big hugs*

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2005-08-09 09:42 PM


I am SO with you on this. Nice work
Sandra

Kitty**
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5 posted 2005-08-09 10:07 PM


I know the feelings quite well and I keep thinking "someday".
Beautifully written!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-08-09 10:16 PM


an aching write, a silent scream
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