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Open Poetry #36

untamed fellow (cinquain)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2005-08-07 01:05 PM

forsake
your suitors' jars
of fiery, intense love;
you savour plain bread, breathing in
freedom

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-08-07 01:25 PM

kaile, now that is a unique way to put it! LOL, loved this.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2005-08-07 01:32 PM

Personally, I enjoy savouring all sorts of bread! ~ From plain to spicy!

Linda

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-08-07 04:45 PM

Baked from clay
Yet eaten as dust
In the struggle for bread
And live

Bodger

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