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Victory Girl

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 08-06-2005 03:03 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


Midnight hours
In local bars
In face of war
The fat bomb ticking

Bugles drums
For the golden ring
Of church bells
In celebration

She said she did
What she felt she could
To serve
And help the nation

Though what it was
Made her lower drawers
Had mornings prone to question

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1 posted 08-06-2005 03:18 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

lol
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....and it was such a big fleet out there!

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ROFL... I wasn't expecting the ending... love it! *G*
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wow!
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