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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2005-08-06 12:44 PM



She Said …
~*Marge Tindal*~

There is silence here
for tears are soundless
Yet in their fall they send
ripples of a heart-in-break
reaching the shore of friend
Wept in a moisturized night
laying in the pool of morn
Please know, dearest one
though there is silence
your tears are held
in loving arms
of friend~

~*~



~Thanking my dear friend, Pat/Nan/Trish/regards2you
for the opening lines of inspiration~
(ONE sweet lady entwined in those lovely names)
*You've always been there, true friend*
~Thank you~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1 posted 2005-08-06 01:05 PM


a soft and tender write, Marge
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2 posted 2005-08-06 02:31 PM


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3 posted 2005-08-06 02:37 PM


Dear Marge:  This is so tender and lovely! I'm sure your friend will be touched by it, as I am!

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2005-08-06 07:58 PM


Very gently penned Marge...
well done.
Hugs~Nancy

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5 posted 2005-08-06 08:26 PM


Pat/Nan/Trish/regards2you, like yourself, is one fine poetess. I miss her presence and her poetry here at pip.

A sweet and tenderly expressed offering of love, comfort, and friendship.

Love & Light,
Linda

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6 posted 2005-08-06 09:18 PM


Just beautiful Marge.

Lovin' hugs, Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

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7 posted 2005-08-07 10:55 AM


good read
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8 posted 2005-08-07 11:20 AM


A beautiful expression of tenderness and love for a friend! Your words touched my heart, as I am sure they touched others as well.

Love,
Patricia

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For dreams are the tiny seeds from which tomorrow grows.'

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9 posted 2005-08-08 12:03 PM


And mine, Marge....and mine.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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10 posted 2005-08-08 11:21 AM


Beautiful
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11 posted 2005-08-08 12:37 PM


Oh my...such an embracing write...I love it...*big hugs*

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12 posted 2005-08-08 12:46 PM


I am almost speechless ...
Beautiful!

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13 posted 2005-08-09 01:17 PM


So beautiful... both the poem... and the loving friendship that inspired it...

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14 posted 2005-08-09 01:30 PM


this was beautiful Margie, thank God for friends....

and beautiful poets with pretty hearts that write these kinds of great awareness treats....lovely

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15 posted 2005-08-10 12:40 PM


This is so special, Marge. I can feel the love and hugs oozing out of each word. You are a special and unique person and one I am proud to call friend.

Please give my regards to Pat. I miss having her here.

hugs, Marti

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Now the world is weird and people take Prozac to make it normal.

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16 posted 2005-08-10 12:42 PM


she is always here in spirit

wonderful dedication Marge

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17 posted 2005-08-17 06:07 PM


Marge, this was such a sweet rendering.   .......jo
Marge Tindal
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18 posted 2005-08-17 09:14 PM



I humbly thank each of you for your kind thoughts~

And now, this very friend needs our prayers ...
Please see ....
/pip/Forum3/HTML/003715.html

The ever-giving of friendship circles 'round~
Pat ... you beat this 'thing' ... you hear me !!!
MY turn to be here for YOU~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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