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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-08-06 11:25 AM



I guess today
is the good day…
one where words come
in form of Thank You

for going out of your way…
to meet a some-what sister…

to bring your smile,
your laughter,
talent
and love
to an otherwise stranger…

We crammed much
into those spare moments
and what was once charged
electrically

became
                                   true enough

magically real.



I see where your father’s genius
lays easily enough
in those wonderful hands

and who could not be charmed
by that smile?

I laugh, even now…
over our give-and-take

when silk bonds created berry moments
of memory…
those fat ones, tucked beneath
wide green leaves…

and we knew our appetites
would always be welcomed
in one another’s
home.

~*~

Thank you, Misc’e…for the summer’s highlight!


© Copyright 2005 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-06 11:44 AM


WOW! What a cool write of an even cooler purely poetic moment! THANKS for sharing.
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2 posted 2005-08-06 12:02 PM


Sunshine,

   You silly goose!  You knew this was the day for the poem!  I have managed to hold back most of the tears from the loss of my former student, but they began to gush as I read this.  You have deeply touched me.  Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

   And, as to the trip, the pleasure was and is mine.  Forever, I'll will remember it.  Afterall, when going out West, one has to meet and see the Wonders of the World!  

   hugs, hugs, and lots of luv
         cathy

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3 posted 2005-08-06 12:42 PM


Just one moment in a lifetime captured in word and photos that neither will forget is something priceless.
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4 posted 2005-08-06 12:54 PM


Very nice, Karilea.
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5 posted 2005-08-06 02:59 PM


Sunshine....this is grand.  What a good picture of my little sis, and what sweet words, berry words!   .....jo
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6 posted 2005-08-06 03:58 PM


Sissie....How lovely it is to meet a special poet and become berry good friends!!  I know!!  Loved the pick of Misce!!  
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7 posted 2005-08-06 04:22 PM


beautifully said....

hugsss

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

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8 posted 2005-08-06 06:55 PM


my heart is smiling... Kari

nice to see you Misce

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

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9 posted 2005-08-06 07:24 PM


Ah this is wonderful to meet in person another PiP poet!
Yes...a summer highlight...
Beautiful photo..beautiful words.
Hugs to you both~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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10 posted 2005-08-06 08:37 PM


Oh, my gosh! I am so happy that I did not miss this berry bliss! How wonderful for each of you to have met and et! (ate!) lol

Cathy, I just knew that you would have a dazzling smile and twinkly eyes!

Karilea, I am so pleased that you shared yours and misce's joyful meeting!

A lovely poem to commemorate this special occasion.

Sending each of you a great big hug!


Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-07-2005 03:11 AM).]

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11 posted 2005-08-06 10:46 PM


  Oh my goodness, with all this attention, I feel my face turning red!  Not a problem, matter of fact it's kind of good to get the blood rushing.  Thank you, Karilea, for doing a fabulous job of masking all that gray hair and taking time to choose the  words that hold great meaning for me.  You are truly a gem!
  

    To All, I'm glad Karilea made it  possible for you to associate my face with my name.  (Now, remember I'm really about 29!)    I've enjoyed reading your poems and seeing many pictures, too.  "It's nice to meet ya!"   I appreciate your kind response.

       hugs and grins,
          misc'e

                  

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12 posted 2005-08-07 10:59 AM


good read
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13 posted 2005-08-08 01:03 AM


The eyes...look into the eyes. They're the eyes of a poet, you can tell by the very depth of them.

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14 posted 2005-08-09 01:09 PM


I knew from her words that she'd have a smile that would light a room. *S*

I'm so jealous of both of you special ladies... getting to meet each other. *S*

Beautiful work... beautiful poets! *S*

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15 posted 2005-08-09 01:21 PM


oh Missy, and Kari, what a nice rhyme...this fits all together nicely with a day in our lives...it's nice to know the face behind the name, or in front of it?  Your Beautiful!!!!

many thanks to both of you....Missy, I'm so sorry to hear of your loss, may you all be well...

I wish so, we could all of us meet one day...wouldn't that be spectacular?


love and hugs
Lee J.

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16 posted 2005-08-09 03:31 PM


Wonderful write!

Eric

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17 posted 2005-08-10 08:32 PM


Jeepers, you all cause me to blush! Thank to everyone, especially Sunshine, for the lovely visit and poem!  

             misc'e, miscee, missie,
      
MsCellanea, miscellanea, miscel

*I love the derivations people have created for my username, so I try to sign it with the spelling that was used or has been used by the person posting.  (Thought this is an opportune time to explain... My spelling has deteriorated, but you'd think I'd be able to spell my name, huh?)

Thanks again.  You've made my day.
    

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18 posted 2005-08-10 08:36 PM


just how awesome is that?

thank you both

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