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0 posted 2005-08-06 12:15 PM



To the unborn love,
That has yet to become,
Let me leave you these rhymes,
I ain’t smart, just been through
The mazes,
and seen different phases,

Think about who u love,
it is complicated
to make the choices,
don’t feel guilty to show
your love,
and the times you get hurt,

Will you make the right choice-
or the wrong ones?
That you will not know,
Till you gone through it-
And felt loves glory-
And its fury,

Dear God, what more can I say?
To these unborn love,
That has yet to know-
How to live,
And survive through the
Tough times,

Take your broken self,
And raise it again,
To the sky-
Try to fly without wings,
And that is what love is.



I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-08-06 02:07 AM


"Try to fly without wings"
no easy trick..
but then, finding love isn't so easy either

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2 posted 2005-08-06 02:19 PM


i've just been inspired. thank you. i will be going now
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