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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2005-08-05 09:13 PM



Forever
~ By Sue ~

Why do people do such harm
to the children in this world, today
It causes so much anger inside
I just want to make them pay

I'd like to make them suffer worse,
than they do our precious children
My heart goes out to each and everyone.
There are many tears inside my heart,
just knowing how the child will suffer,
for the rest of their whole life.

Physical scars will heal in time,
the emotional ones will be there,
FOREVER!

7-14-05


© Copyright 2005 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-08-05 09:31 PM


A right on write, Sue. And for so many, the scars never heal.
And to go along with this, why does anyone feel it's ok to scar adults?

SmartChick
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2 posted 2005-08-05 09:35 PM


I wonder that myself, Midnightsun. You don't have to be a child to be scarred for the rest of your life. Thank you for reading a replying.
Enchantress
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3 posted 2005-08-05 09:41 PM


At times I think the emotional scars are worse..
but then, any kind of abuse to a child, or adult is deplorable.
Hugs for the truth of this write Sue.

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

miscellanea
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4 posted 2005-08-07 12:36 PM


I'll never understand it either, but then again, I've only walked in my own shoes.  I don't know the stress many people face, but I'm sure it can be very great,especially if they don't have a good support system.  By doing something like you did when you wrote this, you are bringing attention to a needy issue.  Perhaps it will help in some small way.  
HopeS
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5 posted 2005-08-07 09:10 AM


So true Sue , emotional scars get burried deep for years and years , along with many hidden tears  

Hope

vandana
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6 posted 2005-08-07 10:52 AM


good read
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2005-08-08 12:59 PM


Smartest Chick ~

Abuse of the blessed children of our world is a difficult subject to write about. It is an emotional undertaking but you have done it superbly, Sweet Sue.

Love & Child Light,
Linda

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