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Bodger
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0 posted 2005-08-05 06:22 PM



Did I dream we danced on aires
That danced our souls
That danced our hearts
That danced

A little heavier

Did I dream that we held ideas in eyes
That challenged our souls
That sought rhythm in our hearts
That glanced

A little spark

Did I dream you in my arms
Dancing with your charms
Beating to a feeling
Held in substrate

As we became one

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1 posted 2005-08-05 06:33 PM


well, didya?
Bodger
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2 posted 2005-08-05 06:39 PM


A sit com in England had the opening lines

Bloke:  Are you dancing

Woman:  Are you asking

Bloke:  I'm asking

Woman:  I'm dancing

and all in a scouse accent

Maybe the dream was there and again maybe not

Bodger

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3 posted 2005-08-05 06:47 PM


Yes..perhaps you did.

Lovely...lovely indeed.

Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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4 posted 2005-08-05 08:02 PM


Liked the format of this one Bodger, very nice indeed.

~* Carpe' Diem *~
Tis only in their dreams that men truly be free, 'twas always thus and always will be. ~ Keating


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5 posted 2005-08-05 08:13 PM


Nice...James
Sunshine
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6 posted 2005-08-05 08:41 PM


quote:
and all in a scouse accent


and what,
please,
does that sound like?

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7 posted 2005-08-05 08:59 PM


enjoyed your words...

M

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8 posted 2005-08-05 09:29 PM


lol
I was going to ask the same Q that lady Sunshine asked ? scouse ?

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9 posted 2005-08-05 11:17 PM


nice D

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
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10 posted 2005-08-07 04:37 PM


The sit-com was called the Liver Birds which comes from the name of a building in Liverpool.

It featured two girls sharing an apartment.

If you listen to the Beatles in their earlier days you have the scouse accent.

I was trying to twist opening around from the words

Thanks for your comments

Bodger


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11 posted 2005-08-08 08:49 PM


Love It.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Bodger
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12 posted 2005-08-09 05:20 PM


Thanks Froggy

Bodger

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13 posted 2005-08-09 06:18 PM


I've missed your words

just an awesome write here

Bodger
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14 posted 2005-08-10 06:42 PM


Thanks

I think I said earlier there were reasons but things panned out differently to what I thought and I have stayed with the ID

Bodger

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