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Untouchable
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mickeeshell New Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 5 |
Untouchable My love He desired to seek and understand The depths of my soul Yet love Remains a sadness I have known Preferring to be alone Painting my silent poetry Covering the walls which surround my pain This space creates a burning Where I neither grow nor die A dense stillness A glimpse of hell Finding no end Remaining insane |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I hope you don't mind me saying, but this touched me deeply...please don't base your happiness on another person, we do fail, we do make mistakes...there is so much to life so many wondrous events...and nothing and no one can ever take that away, unless we allow them to...grieve but then, wallow in the light given you...which is never in another person...hugs and thank you for sharing...I hope I have helped to lighten the load some |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Your words and your talent are well worth reading If they are from you personally, I do feel empathy but your writing is very good Bodger |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A poignant write; and though I am not familiar with your other writings, I believe I can hear your heartbeat in this. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
their envies, jealousy, their defects, taking away your self worth is not worth justifying their wrongfull deeds to help them with their plan. of destroying strong intelligent, creative, talented, insightfull, sensitive, visionary, god filled soul full hearts full of gold, spirits of angels decents of ancients knowing what they will never, their neglect of love, violating your self worth, chaining the heart, bounding the soul, breaking the spirit, all of which is godly, the devils plan, destroys all mankind and his surroundings. what a shame My spirit will rise |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There's no shame in just wanting to hold still a while....none at all....or else I'm one shameful fellow, because I've felt it many times. I like your style -- can't wait to see more! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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