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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-08-05 08:12 AM

window users slam bid, with drunken voices

confessing a pop culture melody, where

demons piece the ears of physical erotic seeds

impulse borrows the idea of tattoos

shifting fire between their fingers

sinking teeth into gut reactions

which shows a truth of spirit…

while easily spoken peace, steps back

into the non places…where will grows arms

into subtle invisible words surrounding earth like a

drug of white union, awakens mystic angelic language

amplifying watchtower squares into

out of body experiences, erasing the chalk of

drive by shootings

strange how worlds have grown from beginning with no end

“the first call” above the firmaments

where faith lives in obedience, within the palms of

wings of the winds...where 12 kingdoms stand

moving sons of man, to might the sounds within

watering earth, with burning lamps of strong towers

brothers of beginning & end are continuing workmen

“so what are the options?” scream the incessant undertones?

deface the impulses, automatically threading the Calls!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2005-08-05 08:48 AM

Gosh, I could have sworn that this was scribed by my pen! ~ Not! ~ But I wish!

I suppose you know which line I liked the best! ~ "awakens mystic angelic language" lol

Your writing always fascinates me!

Loves 'n hugs,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2005-08-05 09:03 AM

LeeJ
And so the symbols scramble the play of the day. Good morning sweet.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-08-05 09:15 AM

WOW!! just...WOW!
Amazing talent you show Lee,
to be able to put into words these thoughts.
Excellent write!
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

4 posted 2005-08-05 06:54 PM

Good words

It reminds of some from a singer

No body robbed a liquor shop
In the lower side of town
No body OD
Or burn a single building down

And everybody's happy in the good old USA
I should could use
A little good news today

Singers words not mine, but you brought them back

Bodger

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-08-05 08:10 PM

Enjoyed...James

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

6 posted 2005-08-05 11:21 PM

singers sing songs straight from the soul

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2005-08-06 12:33 PM

it probably won't surprise you to know
i'll be keepin this one, sister Lee

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2005-08-08 12:45 PM

Sitting here, listening to Disneyland fireworks in the distance....and hoping all those booms are from that sourde....while reading this intense poem -- a surreal experience!

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