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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-08-05 01:24 AM


Have You Ever Thought

With no further details
I might as well guess
Just my own thoughts
Perhaps you care less

Thoughts never lessen
They always increase
Guessing all the time
I shall never find peace

By having no answers
I am always guessing
Creating more despair
It becomes depressing

I keep being reminded
Do not worry you say
Yet you're the reason
I'm guessing each day

Loving communication
This friendship began
Have you ever thought
Perhaps try if you can

Through good and bad
We had kept in touch
I'm sure that you know
You do mean so much

Hope ©2005
With graphic and music link below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_763797.html

© Copyright 2005 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2005-08-05 01:48 AM


Enjoyed...James
Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
2 posted 2005-08-05 11:24 AM


"Thoughts never lessen
They always increase
Guessing all the time
I shall never find peace

By having no answers
I am always guessing
Creating more despair
It becomes depressing "

Loved this part

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-08-05 11:40 AM


Beautiful!!!!!
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-08-05 03:50 PM


Hope, the music is a wonderful addition to your beautiful poem! Lovely, lovely, lovely!


Linda

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2005-08-05 04:13 PM


sometimes things happen...and the communication is lost for a time...
don't lose "hope"


M

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
6 posted 2005-08-05 04:19 PM


Sometimes people simply DON'T think.  It can be hard on the rest of us.  I like the way you wrote this one, the short sharp lines are effective.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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