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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-08-04 01:55 PM



It comes to me, this sweet melody
stirred softly on gentle wind.
I hear the spirit of wild crying  inside

{tambourines echo through night’s silence}

Dark eyes still pierce my soul
when breezes stir this ballet of trees
through the smoke
I can see

Flames flicker,

memories silhouette

still burning  images

traced in desires hold.

Tonight the stars dance     {a sway of lovers song}
in their own rhythm
                divine

and again I am entranced,
dreamlike;    
mesmerized
by the sound
of a spirited
gypsy lullaby.


{revised repost from open 33}


I refuse to make plans past this moment in time....

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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2005-08-04 04:37 PM


just...beautiful m'gentle bella Donna

i'm going to keep this one again

thank you.

you

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

garysgirl
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2 posted 2005-08-04 07:05 PM


Donna, this is so pretty....gentle and
sweet just like you are, Donna. thanks
for sharing with us.
Hugs,
Ethel

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2005-08-07 01:31 AM


Lovely...James
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2005-08-09 12:40 PM


of a spirited
gypsy lullaby

___

YOU are the lullaby...

luv ya

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

littlewing
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5 posted 2005-08-10 04:16 PM



tinkling tinkling tambourine

behind the hemlock tree
spirits rise and fall
with heavy blow of fate

from the fireside . . .


Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2005-08-10 04:29 PM


crackle, crackling

fire burning
rises high
in spirit skies
calling to

new destinies....

LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-08-11 06:50 AM


Donna, this gives a great feeling of such blessings with overflowing love...and your picture tells the story as well...wishing you happy days, thanks so very much for this beauty.
littlewing
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8 posted 2005-08-11 09:04 AM


creeping vine
in thyme
with foreign tongue

nomads

in search for the land of their birth . . .

Startime55
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9 posted 2005-08-11 09:09 AM


How absolutely beautiful...Having married a Gyspy I felt this poem deeply...it sings to the soul....Stunning...*big hugs*

Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-08-11 09:43 AM


Seeking

always seeking
this place,
a home

where ancient wind
intertwines with soul

free spirits

journey into the future.


{thank you everyone, and Littlewings who brings smiles...
thank you}

littlewing
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11 posted 2005-08-11 10:34 AM


you think you are done LOL . . .
yw

LeeJ
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12 posted 2005-08-11 10:54 AM


yeah, parroting Sue's comment, adding
NOT ON OUR WATCH!


Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2005-08-14 12:39 PM


Suziiieeee..... I think I am done??
lol....ok dear gal, prove me otherwise....
*tappin my foot and waitin...*

Your wings truly do fly m'friend and I am so grateful that you are here...

LeeJ...your words always leave me with a smile, thank you.

yesterday is gone
tomorrow doesn't exist

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