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Open Poetry #36

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2005-08-04 08:00 AM

you stir
spoonfuls of balm,
stroking my rough ripples
to still, shine and reflect our tight
team work

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2005-08-04 10:25 AM

Kaile~

Can you hear me ~

BEAUTIFUL !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

Cloud 9
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since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

2 posted 2005-08-04 11:23 AM

Beautiful

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2005-08-04 12:11 PM

"You stir me" through your word "work"!

Linda

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-08-04 11:46 PM

kaile, this has such a wonderful feel to it

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2005-08-05 01:50 AM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-08-10 03:58 AM

awesome write!

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