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lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16

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0 posted 2005-08-04 06:27 AM

Elysian Fields

Truth has given verdict and raised her upon the throne of heaven’s kingdom set forth beyond the Saints. In the true form of poetic beauty where words of a skillful scribe put an end to the Poet of Athena’s text.

With a sun that might of set me inflamed, she beholds a burning heart, and in it‘s holy reply all beings. Consumed by the earth-God each in it’s shrine of love follows her spirit beyond the properties of light into the sweet regions of dawn.

O’ my dear lady of immortal rapture who springs lakes of fire in her eyes, register corridors in a summary of radiance. Her love transports me through the eastern halls of heaven.

Fields of Elysian unveil her face in this picture which such images of beauty. Symbols of life walk the hidden path to her city where immortality stands under her canopy. Bearing wings and the body of a mortal.

(C) Kevin Brian Wright

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-08-04 08:28 AM

My thoughts are, Kevin,
that this is indeed a treat
to read - and feel.

Thank you for being my first read
of the morning!

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
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2 posted 2005-08-04 08:39 AM

Your welcome, and thank you for your reply and comments...!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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3 posted 2005-08-05 10:54 AM

it is like a dream scape of knowledge she is growing beyond almost like a sensi?

Wonderfully penned...lovely

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16

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4 posted 2005-08-05 11:38 AM

Thank you for you comment

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2005-08-09 12:43 PM

bumping this back to the top....it's beautiful....

there are lyrics in your words...

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

lyricpoet
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since 2005-07-16

Posts 199
NY, USA

6 posted 2005-08-09 04:03 PM

Thats cause I write lyrics poems, thank you for your comments

yv
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since 2003-05-30

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7 posted 2005-08-16 01:22 AM

Your words are like a rare wine...sweet and to be savored. Que Hermosa!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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8 posted 2005-08-16 02:03 AM

Really nice reading here.

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