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exhale
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0 posted 2005-08-03 11:39 PM


you shook me to the core
all you had to be was yourself
and i was gone

so this
is what
it feels like
to be left without words

i lay on my bed for hours
thinking
not thinking
thinking
not thinking
listening to music
everything is you
the breeze
the smell of my books

"I roll the window down
And then begin to breathe in
The darkest country road
And the strong scent of evergreen
From the passenger seat as you are driving me home.
"

even my music betrays me

i've been here for hours
everything is you
and i'm just renting space.

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2005-08-04 12:10 PM


I liked this very much...

nn
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2 posted 2005-08-04 07:51 AM


Veeery nice, really.
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2005-08-04 01:33 PM


you portray the mood well in this
Juju
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In your dreams
4 posted 2005-08-04 03:47 PM


exalent

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever
5 posted 2005-08-06 02:17 PM


fantabulous
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-08-06 06:57 PM


don't you just hate it when they invade so much space?
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