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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-08-03 07:07 PM


When they ask me
I look ahead
I can see where I shouldn't go
No way ahead

When I ask myself
Should I take a chance
I look at everything
And that is not a glance

When I look at that rikkety bridge
I look and stand
For only in business
Can you not trust your friends

So in anger
I oil my fangs again

And there in the distance
I change as I should
Into myself
And my body

And now
The fangs
Feel
So good

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-08-04 11:50 PM


lol, and when the fangs feel so good
you jump into the quicksand even faster

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-08-05 06:29 PM


As I said on the earlier reply - it wasn't a good week

Thanks again

Bodger

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