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Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-08-03 05:38 PM


Well Snoozy and Dozey worked hard
Working well on the bridge
Sleepy was taking a bath
Stumbled over the ridge
Of a stone
By the pool
Washing it's I'm told

Hi Ho's ringing out with bubles by Sleepy
Interupted by snores
Gently cleaning the sinuses
And with the trees permission
All the wrong facing covering
For travellers who look at trees
To get home
And do make mistakes

The mine had a new boss
And a new uniform
Wearing it for fools
Who could only see
Fume a form

Position is all
Long vest to cover it
That is how Sleepy
Never changes for the love of it

Sleepy stayed awake
Frightened of loosing it
Hugged his vest around
Taking pleasure from the grooves in it

Always the best at gems
He studied them for hours
Polished them with his nose
And gently with his brows

...All for now
Tune in next week

When I try to meet the deadline

Bodger



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-08-04 11:57 PM


lol, and I shall be tuned in again
for this...is making me smile

thanks!

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-08-05 06:27 PM


Thanks but I should have left it

This week was a no-go and I have been used to the luxury of writing when I felt

Thanks for your lovely words

Bodger

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
3 posted 2005-08-08 08:44 PM


Enjoyed this Bodger. Can't wait to see the next one.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time
4 posted 2005-08-09 05:48 PM


Thanks Froggy

Very kind of you

It is nice to be working and getting home as well

It gives me an hour to be on the site

Bodger

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