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Sunday Evening

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 08-03-2005 04:59 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


You look out your own window
There in the dim lamp light
Is the corner where we waited
For our bus to arrive
On the high picket fence
Local events are announced
On paper that seems spectral
In a veil of blue
And now that we know,
(Except for the last two),
What our numbers are
Isn’t it odd to find ourselves here
With that dog
Whose name we’ve forgotten
Barking at stars  An amber moon
Just rising above the roofs


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1 posted 08-03-2005 05:07 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

A very well written poem.
I enjoyed reading it.
Hugs,
Ethel
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2 posted 08-03-2005 05:14 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

wow, this is stunning.....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

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You absolutely capture these pictures -- and bring out the true colors in them. I like this very much.

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4 posted 04-27-2007 12:20 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

nice poem for a painting.
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