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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-08-03 11:43 AM


we talked about little things
that make that rush
for us as endorphinolics
that savor their addictions
with panting mouths

I loved how your lipstick
outlined the words
you let me wear sometimes
when they spill by accident
over your unprotected protection

and when you look at my eyes
to see if I am really listening
to the well of your stream
or just engulfing my mind
in the wetness of imagining

how your favorites might blend
with mine like discovery and time
when the faster times unravel
into naughty nice knotting
left untied and comfortable

just for this moment's morning


______________

dark




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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-03 12:19 PM


this felt like an easy stroll beside still waters...enjoyed...
SEA
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Posts 22676
with you
2 posted 2005-08-03 12:28 PM


this is awesome D!!


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-08-03 05:03 PM


...outlined the words
you let me wear sometimes
when they spill by accident
over your unprotected protection

and when you look at my eyes
to see if I am realy listening
to the well of your stream
or just engulfing my mind...

~*~

A true friend,
one who listens well...

is priceless.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2005-08-04 01:24 PM


and when you look at my eyes
to see if I am really listening
to the well of your stream
or just engulfing my mind
in the wetness of imagining

and o what a gloriuos morning it was
just enjoyed watching the nj corn
stand erect at attention over here
before it slip slides out of view again.
yep the rise of morning can be blessed some days cant it?

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-08-04 05:04 PM


YOU are amazing Mr D.

Dayem.

Mxx *smiling*


~i want for myself your trembling~

Martie
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6 posted 2005-08-04 05:45 PM


DS

"and when you look at my eyes
to see if I am really listening"

It's easy to tell that way!  

MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2005-08-11 08:25 AM


My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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