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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-08-03 07:22 AM


they bend the bow of morning
and let fly the night there
beyond an amber apple
on top of no telling's head

fast forward to windmill stars
they are not giants here
from under the fan of my bed
but their shadows touch

then are the tattoos on my arms
and my skin is slippery
for long moments when
my panting hound is his master

chasing the car fat freeways
for the bones of other warriors
prechewed and glued eternal
as decals on the windows

of the raider's fans chariots

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scribblenote: cowboys are down the road doing spring training...locals are raider suited gangies..and the kids are confused by double role-less models

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-03 08:37 AM


and then we ask why?  Sheeeesh

Well done, my friend
your images and use of words, really make me smile...enjoy reading you...
looks like we're on the same wave length this morning...
Are you peeking...?  hehe

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-08-03 10:08 AM


well the Ravens   are in this vicinity across the line of course in MD   but  we have the Raphie steroid role model problem now...amazing what makes the news today of importance...


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-08-03 10:58 AM


quote:
and the kids are confused by double role-less models

And therein is the crux of the poem.

Cloud 9
Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980
Ca
4 posted 2005-08-03 06:53 PM


Well written....

Go Cowboys!!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
5 posted 2005-08-04 11:25 PM


the scribble notes
are the icing to your poemcakes

to be a pencil
beneath your fingers
and be a note
on your eraser head

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2005-08-04 11:28 PM


and you have photographed in words
the black and white truth of it


'roll' models, indeed

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