The Ballet of Parting Forever

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Open Poetry #36

The Ballet of Parting Forever

Marshalzu

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Lurking

0 posted 2005-08-02 05:16 PM

Dancing on the ripples
an autumn leaf
swirling in eddies unseen
t'was the last we saw
of each other.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-08-03 04:49 AM

nicely done...

M

Marshalzu

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Lurking

2 posted 2005-08-03 06:11 AM

Thank you for the reply

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2005-08-05 06:48 PM

Very short and sweet or not so sweet

Bodger

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2005-08-05 07:01 PM

Very very nicely done!
Much enjoyed!
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Martie

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California

5 posted 2005-08-05 07:53 PM

Forever is a long time! This was beautiful!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2005-08-05 08:09 PM

Enjoyed...James

EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

7 posted 2005-08-06 02:29 PM

forever is never really all that long. you may find yourself in this person's presence once more

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2005-08-07 05:20 AM

Much said, in just a few,
well chosen words...

I enjoyed this, Andrew

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

Ratleader

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9 posted 2005-08-08 12:42 PM

I won't mention what my dyslexia did to that first line......

....because after I over-rode the glitch, I found a poem I like very much. Let's hope it's the last time -- for now.

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Marshalzu

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Lurking

10 posted 2005-08-08 04:34 PM

Thank you for all the kind words of encouragement and appreciation.

Andrew

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