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lyricpoet
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0 posted 2005-08-02 05:04 PM


The Book of Light


Splendor shall be hers, for she sails upon the vessel of the sun. Let radiance rise within her from that which her eyes have devoured it. Send forth such light which envelope in the folds of golden rays and stand of divine beauty in every turning of the earth. Between two halves of the sky there the portal of heaven opens to the gateway of paradise. Leading to the light of her heart where the transformation of her mortal soul to an angel may take place before God. She stand before the book weighed in the brilliant and steady rays of the sun, magnified a thousand time in its radiance by the divine. Embodies by love on a thrown drinking from the sweet air and the wind. Forms of youth in beauty embraces her loveliness and defies time and age, bring praises to her spirit, with strong cords and angelic voices singing illustrious lyrics from the book of light.

(C) Kevin Brian Wright


© Copyright 2005 Kevin Brian Wright - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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1 posted 2005-08-02 09:23 PM


I like this.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

Dr.Moose1
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2 posted 2005-08-02 10:45 PM


Lyric,
Your imagery is outstanding,I see the divine.
Were one to nit-pick, there are a few mis-spellings. Nothing serious. Since you have chosen to accentuate content over form ,all I can say is, I liked what I've seen so far.
Doc

lyricpoet
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3 posted 2005-08-02 11:21 PM


Thank you for your comments
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4 posted 2005-08-03 05:24 PM


you have the amazing ability to bring the reader right into the core of your words, and all that lies within them.....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

lyricpoet
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5 posted 2005-08-03 08:58 PM


thank you
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