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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-08-02 07:41 AM



my hands are riders now
of that storm that minds the winds
as they gallop the profanity here
on the plastic gravestones
not yet assigned by the god of me

I beckon tomorrow with if words
and promises of will or won't
but my maybe keys jingle
anxious restless to encourage
the discouragement of sinful

pages of paper are the dead tree saints
washed white in latex illustrations
then draped to dry in worthless positions
like the missionary to the armless lover
or the sunset to statues of blind gulls

my parchment worships the dasani dawns
and the jaded foreplay of her indigo
my imperfection is worthy of her healing
and her modesty begs the grounding allure
of my skene arched soffits to beguile

like the brass of sand preparing leather


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dark

scribblenote: contimplation of a LA phone book and the secret messages therein when read backwards  


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-08-02 08:07 AM


You take the essence of human knowledge, focuse on multi-languaged layers to navigate through, enabling health and fitness with mind candy and smoldering good looks and mezmerizing journeys, positive and flattering... a wonderful storyteller...a larger then life Shaman...

You Rock!

Enjoyed this travel through your mind...very open and full of what we all know and feel most of the time...

Hugs you...

Good Morning

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2005-08-02 08:43 AM


my parchment worships the dasani dawns
and the jaded foreplay of her indigo
my imperfection is worthy of her healing
and her modesty begs the grounding allure
of my skene arched soffits to beguile

like the brass of sand preparing leather


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

OH YES YOU ROCK!!!!

wow...that verse is pure poetic genius!!

groooooooooovy baby... groooo--veeeeeey

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~


SEA
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with you
3 posted 2005-08-02 09:30 AM


"I beckon tomorrow with if words
and promises of will or won't
but my maybe keys jingle
anxious restless to encourage
the discouragement of sinful"

hits home for me.... yes, you do....rock

Martie
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4 posted 2005-08-02 11:12 AM


DS

"pages of paper are the dead tree saints
washed white in latex illustrations
then draped to dry in worthless positions
like the missionary to the armless lover
or the sunset to statues of blind gulls"

I don't know how your words are always so fresh and original.  Care to share your secret?  

MGROVES
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5 posted 2005-08-03 05:12 AM


the dark one heals
with words of light~
my soul gently
surrounds yours
as the beat of your heart
plays a soft sigh
while your spirit
soars high
throughout
the night~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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