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Grieving Upon Broken Wings
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Grieving Upon Broken Wings |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Grieving Upon Broken Wings Uplifting me to those heights It became easier to climb When I had loving support Your heart alongside mine For you gave me the reasons As I came out of my shell The joy you gave my heart Became as clear as a bell I felt the love neath my wings Enabling my heart to soar Believing in your promises In being friends forevermore You have left this uncertainty Upon my wings of despair For when I need assurance A true friend would be there The impact from your silence This heart no longer sings As I crawl back in my shell Grieving upon broken wings Hope©2005 With graphic and music below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/92/poem_763178.html |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is painful to depend on others for happiness...they never seem to be able to live up to our expectations...and so, we must find our own life, bring it in and hold it close, nurturing it, like a fragile newborn...claiming our part of the rainbow...Man, my friend, has forgotten how to fly...without another... Dear sweet Hope, always shine from within and love the life of all.... Profound writing my friend. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
this poem to me speaks of "self support" because writing and expression is just that--sometimes that and faith in God is all you need. inspiring write! |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hope Words are nice but I wouldn't want to be around when the feeling ran high And the house moved about 10 feet as you picked it up and through it Lovely words as always but the restraint Bodger |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Hope, I understand this, so well. I guess that is what I have done. Crawled back into my shell. |
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