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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2005-08-01 10:54 AM



that place in our minds
where the dark trees make secrets
and you dance your shimmer

under a whispering moon
where your vixen dallies
a faerie in her cellophane

and you blush then giggle
at the shiver of your skin
and how the watchers eyes

are the pools of your pleasure
where your woman swims
and your lady just watches

you wet your lips then
luxeria in azured gown
apronless to the daydreams

of the satyr's rhyme



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-08-01 10:58 AM


sounds like your sitting next to shore of some tropical paradise and describing an ocean's vexon upon the heart, soul and mind
Lovely D...sent waves through me...as the ocean is quit obviously a great love of mine to...

wonderful images planted...enjoyed!

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with you
2 posted 2005-08-01 01:08 PM


"are the pools of your pleasure
where your woman swims
and your lady just watches"


yes, but she watches wistfully

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Gaia
3 posted 2005-08-01 01:17 PM


cool imagery
MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-08-03 05:20 AM


a real pleasure

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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