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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-08-01 07:45 AM

you left night words there
under the window on the table
in the room of my mind

small talk affirmations
but I noticed your caution too
when your apron was folded down

and the fragile of your horizon
was the nearly see thru
that I wanted to cover

with the eyes of my hands
but I didn't really want to
the more that you revealed

of the dawn worth waiting for

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Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-08-01 08:02 AM

Enjoyed this..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-08-01 08:08 AM

it is good to hope and wait patiently....which seems to be your natural...

Good Morning D. Thank you for the great apple fritter this morning...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-08-01 08:28 AM

The patient tenderness
seeps forth in this...
one that doesn't grab and jerk
but simply waits for the
natural unfolding
of emotion.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2005-08-01 08:43 AM

you left night words there
under the window on the table
in the room of my mind

I love the way you wrote this. I really
enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2005-08-01 08:53 AM

thank you folks for the blessing
of your eyes

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2005-08-01 09:30 AM

patient eagerness....what a great combination....

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

7 posted 2005-08-01 05:40 PM

Lovely as usual, Mr D

it's always a pleasure to see through your eyes

Mxx

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

8 posted 2005-08-01 07:30 PM

Your way with words astounds me. Beautiful write!

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

9 posted 2005-08-01 07:35 PM

Excellent, so much so, I went back for another read.

Patricia

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-08-03 05:17 AM

thanks for the smile

taking a week off
and heading down south

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2005-10-27 02:38 PM

And it is -- absolutely. Well done!

Love these little trips to the back of the forum!

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

12 posted 2005-10-27 03:17 PM

Sir RL..you make me think the back room ain't so bad. Thanks amigo

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