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JamesMichael
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Austin Morning Lights

I'm running like a wild stallion,
proud and fast and free.
My corral started feeling like a jail,
after hearing her voice calling out to me.
So I jumped fence and headed for Austin,
the last place she was known to be.

The closer I get the more I know,
within her embrace I yearn to be.
Wild thoughts and desires fill my head
when I feel her heart a calling me.
If I run all night perhaps I'll be
in her arms, by Austin's morning light.

JamesLee
July30
2005
My son and his new wife
just took a trip to Austin
for a job opportunity...
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with you


1 posted 08-01-2005 09:39 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I liked this, very well done, and good luck to your son and his wife!
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best wishes for them.
enjoyed

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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JM,

Backtracking your poems to see where it (falling in love) started. Enjoyed.

SG
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Well done James..
I wish you son and his wife well in Austin.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

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5 posted 08-03-2005 05:11 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

I liked this, James. It sounded like a song.
And, good luck to your son and his wife.
I hope all works out well for them.
Hugs,
Ethel
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One word critique:

Yeowzah!!

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Family is a great inspiration

Awesome job
JamesMichael
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Thank you all for the wonderful responses...James
 
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