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Fisherman
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0 posted 2005-07-31 11:03 PM



Above earth’s scape with strife abounding
Above the clouds with storms a raging
Beyond the rim of what once was
On the other side of ever
Lays a place beyond description,
Lays a place beyond compare
Where muses sing and angels play
Where worry is a word no more
And sorrow is lost and forgotten
Only hope and joy begotten.
Where is this place beyond all being?
Where is this place I oft go fleeing?
‘Tis a place not hard to find,
Within the wheatfields of my mind.

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Martie
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1 posted 2005-07-31 11:29 PM


Fisherman

I understand this place, I have one too!  

marcel
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az, usa
2 posted 2005-08-01 02:20 AM


yes! the mind can take you anyplace you desire. sweet piece.
GG
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2005-08-01 07:44 AM


I never had a good imagination... but I'm trying! We all need some place of beauty to run to. Excellent poetry here. I love it!

Always, Alyssa

Hupomeno.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-08-01 08:38 AM


this was like a painting, that you could feel...profound!
Munda
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5 posted 2005-08-01 04:34 PM


Seems like you found that special place where Muse takes over and beauty is created. Lovely write.
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6 posted 2005-08-07 11:55 AM


I have such places -- not just one -- that I go inwardly....but somehow when I do, I never feel alone. There's always a welcome presence with me, that doesn't detract at all, and often makes me feel more whole.

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latearrival
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7 posted 2005-08-08 12:21 PM


This brought to mind the movie Dad, He had made a whole different place to live in...
martyjo

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