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* shining star*
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since 2005-06-29
Posts 76
PA,USA

0 posted 2005-07-31 07:50 PM


I don't know whats going on.
Should I even ask ,
I'm scared of whats going to happen.
Hopefully we are stronger than our words.
I guess we all need to talk,
but that walk is going to be a nightmare.
Are bonds are stronger than anything,
only we can decide what is right.
And tonight I'm scared or everything,
our friendship,
And if we are even going to stay tight friends.
The worst part is,
I don't even know why there
is so much tension
between all of us here.
But I guess I'm going to find out.


-Smile, it's not a sin.

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2005-07-31 11:11 PM


can sense the confusion in your words
well done

lyricpoet
Member
since 2005-07-16
Posts 199
NY, USA
2 posted 2005-08-01 07:42 AM


Well composed, nicely done!
GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
3 posted 2005-08-01 07:46 AM


Friendship is a difficult thing... but worth it in the end, if everyone puts forth their best. I hope it all works out for you. Well expressed.

Always, Alyssa

Hupomeno.

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