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Gwenhwyfar
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Gwenhwyfar |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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 lost within enchantment gazing deep within the future my soul ten paces behind running backwards within a tangled web of the past Arthur I am forever cursed... without your love who am I... I once was your Gwenhwyfar Now... I am plagued fruitless in my desire meandering aimlessly amongst the Isle of Avalon caught somewhere in between the mists and the past Arthur, who am I... for no longer do I feel as if I am still your Gwenhwyfar If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 This is absolutely wonderfully written! Thank you for this treasure for my library. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
May you be who you want to be...and with the one that loves who you are...James |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I really like how you describe Gwen's despair, but even more I'm intrigued by your use of different fonts, so you can read the poem in different ways. Great job! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful, both the poem and the image Enjoyed muchly Maree  |
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yv Senior Member
since 2003-05-30
Posts 574 |
That was enchanting. Very lovely...classic write! Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Gwenhwyfar-Guinevere, Guineivre, Ginerva Which ever name you answer to when called, (You are one and all the same)...Fear I, this Arthur Be, not the king of old in this poetic tale- But sad exists within your present realm... Fair queen, upon my knee I offer you my shield and bow...pray I Your king sees clear a path return to thee, If that be your true intent and hope, And all the past between be glad for gave, if not-- Take a second try at Lancelot... enjoyed the poem --------------ice ><> |
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