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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2005-07-30 11:20 AM



Consciousness
Without comment

Sunset—
Above a parking lot
The colored sky

http://www.juliesulzen.com/parking.html

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2005-07-30 12:06 PM


you really have a unique way of saying things.....I like your style....

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-07-30 12:17 PM


Perfect!  I love the way you do these with the pic link.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2005-07-30 04:08 PM


...
and do you see the Z
of some childhood
memories...
the brilliant of
a sunrise sky,
forming
majestically...

before the I?

~*~

One of the most wonderful matters
that surround Passions In Poetry...
is when one is inspired
by another...

as you were...

and as you did.

Thank you.

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
4 posted 2005-08-07 12:05 PM


You're a gift to this place....and I'm thankful for it.

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5 posted 2005-08-09 12:53 PM


I love this... and I agree. *S* You are a gift to us. *S*
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