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Open Poetry #36
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DonFurr
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0 posted 2005-07-30 05:01 AM



Softly I slip between your wisdom
Gently guided inside a delight
Entering the unknown but familiar
Edging within an awesome insight


Bind  me sole and Soul to the One
Together to pour Love into the world
until tears of joy fall like rain


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with you
1 posted 2005-07-30 10:33 AM


getting inside someones thoughts, their mind....it's great when two people can connect on that level
Bodger
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2 posted 2005-07-30 04:07 PM


I like this - it seems to be bland but is yet quite incisive

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marcel
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3 posted 2005-07-31 03:27 AM


hmmmmm, i like the intimate expression of this....but maybe that is the mind of a scorpio that feels this. In any case, nicely expressed.
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