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Open Poetry #36

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2005-07-29 11:45 PM

white-haired
dad checks out mum
cheeky twinkle at her
dolled up; awry figure ignored
lasting

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

1 posted 2005-07-30 04:05 PM

Prosaic was the word that came to mind when I read this

Dont ask me why, it has been a long week

Bodger

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-07-30 04:10 PM

Kaile....

this has beautiful depth
in the aged taking
care of their
beloved...

and I applaud this!

Thank you!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-07-30 04:21 PM

Kaile~
You word-painted a small portraiture that belongs in a locket~

Lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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