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Apples Naive
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Apples Naive |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Re Post Apples Naive Distress blows hard upon my sail And the riggings cry out in wail. Straining to stand the strength of dare Hard pressed to guess the why and where. Bolts of streaming lightening strike Thunder screams across the night Phantoms dance upon the dense Fiddlers fiddle on the fence. And echoes fear, holds hands with me For I am blind and cannot see The saving sight of greenery Beyond the shadows mystery Each scream of rage grows whiter white The locks of hair that were delight And skin that turns like seas to gray Within the terms of times display To those that search the ship I leave, The last of my apples naive |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And echoes fear, holds hands with me For I am blind and cannot see The saving sight of greenery Beyond the shadows mystery Each scream of rage grows whiter white The locks of hair that were delight And skin that turns like seas to gray Within the terms of times display ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The problem with apples is that they arent raspberries...LOL...  But your poetry is an Eden's orchard of wisdom and vision. Those verses above are candy apples. *S*  *ww*    one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ... ~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hugs, them are fabulous apples you leave us Sy... wonderfully written, and felt... Good Morning & Happy Friday |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What a deep and soulful write, m'friend...  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Phantoms dance upon the dense Fiddlers fiddle on the fence. Yup  We got a bite of your wisdom today we did! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
The apple maybe naive. But not the words Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Re post or not..always something to learn from your words, Sy M |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sy, Ditto Janet Marie and by the way I can never read your writing too many times. Thanks for revisit.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great one My spirit will rise |
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