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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-07-29 04:13 AM


Cross the night
bridge of dreams.
Stand with me,
rising vapour of
morning, vanished by
our love's radience.
First beams of
sun,splinter woodland
walks, harlequin colours
cast around us.
Your beauty sharp
now, morning risen.
Birds sleekly fine,
go before us,
towering trees, lime
green, moss hung,
our wild cathedral.
By a waterfall,
i pray at
the alter of
your love, speaking
solemn words of
honour to you,
your gentle heart.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2005-07-29 04:15 AM


BRAVO! a very fine write

"our wild cathedral"

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2005-07-29 05:34 PM


I like this alot.  Its always nice to read you

Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic

The dictionary never lies.... I am magical (;

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-07-29 05:41 PM


I like this a lot as well

Bodger

Martie
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California
4 posted 2005-07-29 07:50 PM


Goldenrose

There are many places without walls, that are more church than a church.  This was lovingly romantic!

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