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Your Will Be Done |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa 
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I did not know what I was doing And did not believe to be wrong I harbored only good intentions But this you knew for far too long I did not think that this would happen And did not ever understand I tried so hard to do your bidding But still you had a different plan I did not know the circumstances And never had complete control I only did what you edicted Now watch me as I play the fool I do not wish to know the outcome And do not want my thoughts revised I play your role for selfless reasons Knowing I am the one despised I do not care how I am treated And spare me any sympathy I keep my soul inside the shadows But still you will not leave me be I know there's not a future for me And it's hard for me to catch my breath I read your script and cursed my ending For me it is the second death Signed: Judas Iscariot [This message has been edited by JesusChristPose (07-28-2005 08:05 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hmmm, I guess since I don't understand or accept religious 'demands'... this would never really be a write my muse could fathom writing. But it seems you got something "off your chest" with this? I only did what you edicted Now watch me as I play the fool |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very powerful writing and written very well! I refuse to make plans past this moment in time.... |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Midnitesun ~ Getting something off my chest? Well, let me put it this way... I can empathize with Mr. Iscariot and believe his view should be heard. Gentle Spirit & you both, thanks for reading and commenting.  "I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I keep my soul inside the shadows But still you will not leave me be" i loved this part, but I have no idea who the man is, you were writing this about. |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Hey SEA... Judas Iscariot! The man who betrayed Christ. Thanks for reading. "I have gone away. The bed is cold and empty. Trees bend their boughs toward the earth. And nighttime birds float as black faces." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 oh...opps...maybe I need to do some ahhha reading...(no...I don't feel stupid at all ) |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Good write thi,s and doesn't matter how or when you betray someone it will catch up with you that's for sure. ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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JesusChristPose Senior Member
since 2005-06-21
Posts 777Pittsburgh, Pa |
Thanks everyone for reading and replying! |
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